My husband and my son
The left side of the picture is my son, Martin ,he is a nice boy of 9 years. He has a round face, big brown eyes, long straight blonde hair. And dimple on her left cheek. He is an intelligent. He can speak many languages such as, English, Japanese, Chinese and France.He always make his friends so his friends are happy to talk with him.
Next to,The right side of the picture is my husband, Jack. He is a tall man who has a well built. He has an oral face, short curly brown hair, blue eyes, and the thick black mustache. He is athletic person. He enjoys all of sports. He always plays football every weekend and plays on the university team. I think of him as,he is an easy going person because he does not like to follow the rules and does not care what others say about him. However, he is helpful person because when his friends want some help from him, he is very glad to help them. Although, they are different, but. I am very glad to have them in my life, and I love them so much.
It is a good story. Overall is not bad. But I think that your topic is normal, you can use other sentences better than this. So I give you 8/10
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ตอบลบYou choose the picture very well and your story easy to understand. But you have a little mistake such as, you should put a space after the comma. So I give you 8.5/10.
ตอบลบIt's very interesting.Ooh, he's very handsome.I will give you 8.5 points.
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