วันพฤหัสบดีที่ 28 กันยายน พ.ศ. 2560

My Favorite Place









My Favorite Place


                           I know everyone must have a place to go to relax in their free time, same as me.This is a picture of my room. It is located in Chiang Mai. I often spend time in this quiet room.
Whether it is for work, reading, or when I'm stressed out of things.
                           
                  My holidays ago, I woke up in the morning, and opened the sliding glass door.
After that I still lying on the floor in the middle of my room near my lazy cat named Moshi
I saw the beautiful blue sky and smelled the fresh natural.Every morning, my mom will come with the hot cocoa. It is very tasty and I really love it and I love to drink the hot cocoa at the terrace. Because I heard a song of birds and heard the sound of the blowing wind. The blowing wind touched me while drinking the hot cocoa. It is a very special thing. It made me feel like I was a princess in a fairy tale in the woods that have the animals is friends.
Moshi looking at me with a smiling face and singing an opera song, it is hungry already so I brought some food for him.  Then I always tell my bad story and he always listened to me. Moshi is a special friend in my favorite place.


                       My room is the best, I always feel relaxed and happy. It makes me forget the stresses that come from the outside. And this is the whole reason why I choose my room as my favorite place.

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  1. ไม่ระบุชื่อ15 ตุลาคม 2560 เวลา 00:46

    Your story is good and well-organized, I like it. But I think that you combine your sentences are not good, some words can cut out of the sentences or combine it. And you put dot and comma are wrong position. Overall is okay. So I give point 7/10 for you.

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  2. Your story is good and I like your favorite place. Your grammar is not bad. I give you 8.5 points.

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  3. Your story is good. I will give you 8.5 points.

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  4. ไม่ระบุชื่อ21 ตุลาคม 2560 เวลา 21:42

    It's very interesting.I will give you 8.5 points.

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