My special friends
This picture is the picture about my special friends. The person who is on the far left is Nuntinee. she is a slender figure, shoulder-length hair. She has a oval face, small eyes and fair complexion. She wears neat clothes. She is friendly and talkative person. so our friends are very fun when we talk with her. In addition, Nuntinee is fashionable and she always updates on trends. Friends often choose to consult her on this.
And the next person is Phattaraporn who is the people on the left side of my hand in the picture. she is a rather medium height and rather plump figure. She has fair skin , straight dark-brown hair with a round face and small eyes. She is a positive and funny person who always makes jokes for us.Sometime, she is reasonable such as when we have problems she will find the reason for explain what is right or wrong.
The last is my friend who is on the right side of the picture, his name is Thanawat. He is a attractive person. He has a tall man who low undercut black hair and oval , brown eyes ,oval face and his complexion is quite sun-tanned. He wears neat clothes. He is intelligent and talkative person. She is very good at creative thinking. He is often assigned to invent the pedestal trays to teachers in Teacher's day every year.
Finally, they have the different appearances and personalities. But they are good friends and always help me.
Wow! I love your friends, especially the last person, I know him is very cute and attractive and you say about him very good and thuth. hahaha! Your contents are good, I like your writing. But sometime you used the same words or wrote it repetition, it may make the reader bored. So I give you 8.5/10.
ตอบลบWow!! Your friends are beautiful and handsome. I want to meet them once.
ตอบลบFor the story your have a little mistake. In the sentence "She has a oval face" I think you should write this "She has "an" oval face" and you often forgot add "a" in some sentence, such as "He is intelligent and talkative person" this sentence you should write "He is an intelligent and talkative person".
For this story I give you 8.5/10
Your friend is very cute.The content you describe is very good. I like your story. I give you 9.
ตอบลบYour story is very interesting. In the picture, They are beautiful woman and handsome man. You can write the paragraph is well-organized and you choose the topic is interesting. But the conclusion is too short so I will give you 9/10
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